silentboxer1989
Smash Rookie
Welcome to the critique my wario thread where we try to help each other improve.
Rules of the Thread:
1. Present 1 or 2 videos of yourself, giving background as to when the videos were recorded, where, who is the opponent, etc (don't make this part a wall of text though lol). Tournament videos or MM videos are preferred but (serious) friendlies are acceptable. Also please post videos that are recent and of things that you want critiqued which means it doesn't always have to be that you won the match since even in winning there's something to be learned. No computer matches are permitted but if need be WiFi matches are allowed but only if the critiques are OK with it. Best video quality that you can offer should be presented since improvement of skill is what is truely important to us.
2. Videos that are presented will be added to the original post and cateriagized and any comments will be posted under thier name so that they don't have to search the whole thread in search of who related help to them.
3. Before posting a comment on how to help your fellow Wario in his endeavor to become better. YOU MUST WATCH BOTH VIDEOS HE/SHE POSTED. This way you can get a accurate view of their play-style and to help them see where the holes in their game plan are.
6. It is preferred that videos be against S tier, A tier, or B tier characters because those are the matchups most people know well so we can give you better advice. Though if that's not possible, then since you have no alternative any character will do but you most likely won't get as good advice.
7. You must read your critiques.
8. You must ask for advice or feedback on a a specific aspect of your Wario in your post. For instance, something like "how can i work on my ground game" or "how do i approach this person" or "what am i doing wrong". Don't expect to just dump a bunch of random videos and expect people to tell you how to be good.
9. Please after you post your videos please specify who you would like to judge it in the most generic opinion you can say everyone. You can suggest a certain Judge to do it but wait time might be longer.
Judges:
Masky
DMG
Video list:
silentboxer:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n4WNAmE9DkU (Me. VS random online snake)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nbsI2KBL7kY (Me [black and white] vs. Dynomite)
TheOgbot:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ALJQjip1zNw vs GnW
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gMgMsTHyJn8 vs Snake
Croi:
Rules of the Thread:
1. Present 1 or 2 videos of yourself, giving background as to when the videos were recorded, where, who is the opponent, etc (don't make this part a wall of text though lol). Tournament videos or MM videos are preferred but (serious) friendlies are acceptable. Also please post videos that are recent and of things that you want critiqued which means it doesn't always have to be that you won the match since even in winning there's something to be learned. No computer matches are permitted but if need be WiFi matches are allowed but only if the critiques are OK with it. Best video quality that you can offer should be presented since improvement of skill is what is truely important to us.
2. Videos that are presented will be added to the original post and cateriagized and any comments will be posted under thier name so that they don't have to search the whole thread in search of who related help to them.
3. Before posting a comment on how to help your fellow Wario in his endeavor to become better. YOU MUST WATCH BOTH VIDEOS HE/SHE POSTED. This way you can get a accurate view of their play-style and to help them see where the holes in their game plan are.
6. It is preferred that videos be against S tier, A tier, or B tier characters because those are the matchups most people know well so we can give you better advice. Though if that's not possible, then since you have no alternative any character will do but you most likely won't get as good advice.
7. You must read your critiques.
8. You must ask for advice or feedback on a a specific aspect of your Wario in your post. For instance, something like "how can i work on my ground game" or "how do i approach this person" or "what am i doing wrong". Don't expect to just dump a bunch of random videos and expect people to tell you how to be good.
9. Please after you post your videos please specify who you would like to judge it in the most generic opinion you can say everyone. You can suggest a certain Judge to do it but wait time might be longer.
Judges:
Masky
DMG
Video list:
silentboxer:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n4WNAmE9DkU (Me. VS random online snake)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nbsI2KBL7kY (Me [black and white] vs. Dynomite)
TheOgbot:
Watched the G&W one. Your biggest problem in that match was that you don't understand G&W's moves, the spacing or the timing. Watch PhantomX's videos against UTD Zac, they're kinda old but I think they're good at explaining the matchup.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ALJQjip1zNw vs GnW
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gMgMsTHyJn8 vs Snake
Croi:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bOHREo5Ndms (vs Luigi)I would start by being a little more patient you just kind of rushed in and get picked apart. You also need to remember that Luigi's aerials out prioritize Wario's. Fair will trade though. Be more aware of what you're opponent is doing and try to avoid them. Luigi shouldn't be able to bair you like that. I would try to lessen the amount of fsmash you were just totally whiffing them.